Rules are:
To post a paragraph of your latest manuscript with the word 'look' in it. I've cheated slightly and used 'looking'.
This is from a WIP, called Ocean Kills:
Hope everyone is having a good Sunday :)
Another man entered.
This one wasn't bad looking. His sandy blond hair was streaked by the
sun—a dead give-away he was a surfer. His muscular chest almost
popped the snaps of his blue police shirt. He stood tall and strong,
and my gaze devoured him. I wondered if his physique was as perfect
underneath the shirt and trousers as they appeared. A dimple appeared
on one cheek as he smiled. “I'm Officer Bliss. I'll be sitting in
on tonight's talk.” He moved like the sea he obviously lived in—he
reeked of salt and freedom.
Thanks Victoria for the tag :)
I like that last line--it's a good one.
ReplyDeleteMmm... This guy sounds delish ;D
ReplyDeleteOfficer Bliss makes me think I should have a wad of cash ready. Haha! I love it. :)
ReplyDeleteI love that last line "...he reeked of salt and freedom."
ReplyDeleteMakes you want to lick him, like he was a pretzel... lol
I like the last line as well!
ReplyDeleteLove the last line, too. NAILED IT!
ReplyDeleteMmmmm Callan, you're so yummy!
ReplyDeleteThink I have heard that name before? lol. Love the last line also.
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